Phoenix Wright Peeps Help Please! NOW EDITED!

Does this (actual text under cut) sound like a reasonable and believable scenario to have happened just after PW:AA 1:3?

I'm trying to gauge how both VK and Miles might have felt after that. VK obviously knows he only has to string Miles along for a bit longer.

Miles I think is starting to have doubts but he's still under VK's influence a lot. It's important for me to have the reader feel that ultimately, he is completely reliant on VK for his opinions regardless of any small attempts at free will.

So it's a bit of a balancing act working out what they might say to one another.

I can't believe how long these scenes with the two of them take to play out. Fuck - I'm going to end up with the fic from hell.

Beware spoiler for 3:4

 

( Edited But Still TL;;DR )